Mr. A.L.Mohammed
Rameez Raja,
I-PGDM, PSGIM,
29-JULY-2013
Mr.
Tulsi Tanti
THE
CEO,
SUZLON
TECHNOLOGIES,
Subject:
Comments on the financial report of 2011-12.
Dear
Mr. Tanti,
Any market situation is
indeterminate and rests on the speculative interests of its stakeholders.
Investors though hold high regards on the reputation of the organisation they
venture to invest. With myself having been associated with your organisation
for the past 3 years engaging in extensive share support at every fiscal have
arrived with a sense of discontent on your company’s financial returns for the
year 2012-13. The Net Sales/Income from operations have dropped drastically
from Rs.1,254.43 crore to Rs.493.68 in crore establishing a wave of uncertainty
among investors to appeal in the future proposals of the company.
The equity share policy could be
considered for revision to encourage capital from investors for future
endeavours but definitely through more effective and promising projects. The
overall increase in the operational expenditure and the rate of depreciation
have been the factors affecting the growth of the organisation, these issues
require immediate attention. I think this objective will benefit the growth of
the company as well as the requisites of the stakeholders. I look forward
towards a continuous association with your organisation and request you to do
the needful.
Sincerely,
Rameez
.
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ReplyDeleteLetter looks professional. Looks simple and neat and gives clear view of a shareholder of the company. Highlighted the areas to be concentrated for future growth of the company which is a worth mention.
Please find my views below:
1) TO address contains phrase “THE CEO” which shall be “CEO”.
2) Body of the letter should be aligned justify.
3) Try avoiding mentioning numbers as it is well known to the CEO of the company.
Arun Kumar